of joy and pride - can almost weep
of happiness, that is, please know-
we made it to the top - somehow
feet are tired, hearts beat fast
our joy - the memory will always last
'cause what a feeling, to be on top
after hiking, all non stop
through rain and storm we made it through
we climbed that mountain, me and you
every time I get up there
all I can do is sit and stare:
- the world in all its glory: the sea and the sky
and I can't stop thinking - how lucky am I
to have a day like that
what a gift
This is just where I want to be
in the arms of that someone next to me
on that top
and with the world at our feet
how lucky am I
enjoy the day
enjoy the moment
......getting there......
.....being there....
PS: There is no such thing as bad weather, only bad clothing.....:-)
It's great being on the top after hiking in rain ☺👍
ReplyDeleteSure is, Thanks Mahathi:-)
DeleteA lovely poem, thats a great achievement. And the images are fabulous. Its so good to be happy and on top of the world.
ReplyDeleteSure is, thanks alot:-)
DeleteEli! It's such a beautiful poem. Lucky you! The sky is the limit:)
ReplyDeleteYaaay, thanks my friend:-)
DeleteBeautiful poem and the pics are great. Many happy returns of the day :)
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Something's Cooking
Thanks a lot dear:-) Big hugs
DeleteIt is a wonderful feeling - of having achieved something. And the adrenalin flow makes the climb every bit worth it. Figuratively speaking too reaching a height in the company of a loved one feels wonderful, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteOh yes, no words to describe...almost... Big hugs my sweet friend Tulika:-)
DeleteWhat a wonderful feeling that must be to be on top there! And such views to enthrall you! Beautiful expression of a thrilling experience.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Beloo:-) Hugs
DeleteA poem full of life, just like you!
ReplyDeleteI love the energy that you put in your poems!
Cheers
Geets
Oh thanks alot my dear - so happy you like it:-) Hugs your way
DeleteIt feels amazing after completing a hike. And if you have loved one when you reach the top, even better :D Beautiful poem Eli :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much- that is so true:-)
DeleteDearest Eli,
ReplyDeleteWOW, you tackled a LOT and even in bad weather... Hats off to you both and so happy for you for having shared the excitement with that very special other.
Hugs and blessings,
Mariette
Dear Mariette. Thank you so much for your always so kind encouragements! It means alot. Lots of love to you my friend:-)
DeleteSuch a wonderful feeling to share in your joys, dear Eli! You took us along in each and every happy moment of yours. Your smile in the end says it all, and I am smiling along. :) Sending warm sunshiny hugs to you!
ReplyDeleteOh, you are so sweet. Thanks a lot my dear Arti. Lots of love your way
DeleteThe sense of achievement after overcoming the obstacles and putting in great efforts is simply amazing! Glad that you had such a thrilling experience. You look so lovely and happy, Eli! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks alot dear Shilpa:-) That is so kind. Lots of love to you XX
Deletewow, the pictures look awesome and what an experience simply superb :)
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