26/09/2016

The world at my feet

Nothing beats that feeling deep
of joy and pride - can almost weep 
of happiness, that is, please know- 
we made it to the top - somehow
feet are tired, hearts beat fast 
our joy - the memory will always last

'cause what a feeling, to be on top 
after hiking, all non stop
through rain and storm we made it through
we climbed that mountain, me and you 

every time I get up there 
all I can do is sit and stare:
- the world in all its glory: the sea and the sky 
and I can't stop thinking - how lucky am I 

to have a day like that 
what a gift 

This is just where I want to be  
in the arms of that someone next to me

on that top 
and with the world at our feet

how lucky am I

enjoy the day
enjoy the moment
......getting there......




.....being there....



PS: There is no such thing as bad weather, only bad clothing.....:-) 

22 comments:

  1. It's great being on the top after hiking in rain ☺👍

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  2. A lovely poem, thats a great achievement. And the images are fabulous. Its so good to be happy and on top of the world.

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  3. Eli! It's such a beautiful poem. Lucky you! The sky is the limit:)

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  4. Beautiful poem and the pics are great. Many happy returns of the day :)
    Kohl-Eyed Me
    Something's Cooking

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  5. It is a wonderful feeling - of having achieved something. And the adrenalin flow makes the climb every bit worth it. Figuratively speaking too reaching a height in the company of a loved one feels wonderful, isn't it?

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    1. Oh yes, no words to describe...almost... Big hugs my sweet friend Tulika:-)

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  6. What a wonderful feeling that must be to be on top there! And such views to enthrall you! Beautiful expression of a thrilling experience.

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  7. A poem full of life, just like you!
    I love the energy that you put in your poems!

    Cheers
    Geets

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    1. Oh thanks alot my dear - so happy you like it:-) Hugs your way

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  8. It feels amazing after completing a hike. And if you have loved one when you reach the top, even better :D Beautiful poem Eli :)

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    1. Thank you so much- that is so true:-)

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  9. Dearest Eli,
    WOW, you tackled a LOT and even in bad weather... Hats off to you both and so happy for you for having shared the excitement with that very special other.
    Hugs and blessings,
    Mariette

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    1. Dear Mariette. Thank you so much for your always so kind encouragements! It means alot. Lots of love to you my friend:-)

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  10. Such a wonderful feeling to share in your joys, dear Eli! You took us along in each and every happy moment of yours. Your smile in the end says it all, and I am smiling along. :) Sending warm sunshiny hugs to you!

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    1. Oh, you are so sweet. Thanks a lot my dear Arti. Lots of love your way

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  11. The sense of achievement after overcoming the obstacles and putting in great efforts is simply amazing! Glad that you had such a thrilling experience. You look so lovely and happy, Eli! ♥

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    1. Thanks alot dear Shilpa:-) That is so kind. Lots of love to you XX

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