up towards the blue sky
- makes her smile, she feels grateful, at peace
she got out of the cage
just ran off that fake stage
- with a force that grew strong from within
it just had to be so
'cause at last she said no
- and by that breaking free finally
and the world seems all new
so much joy to pursue
- she knew not that the sun was so bright
she just wanders around
taking in every sound
every taste every scent is so clear
and a bubbling feeling is just filling her up
from her tickling toes all the way to the top
and she giggles out loud for the cat to hear
she can sing if she likes, what she choose she can wear
she makes up her own mind, listens to her own voice
and she follows her heart, and will go for its choice
because her life is hers again now
What a lovely poem so full of joy and hope. So uplifting and joyous! Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Cathy:-)
DeleteBeautiful. I'm glad she made the break and lives free. Every woman deserves nothing less.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Corinne:-)
DeleteBeing free is so much more than just a word...This come out wonderfully in the lines you wrote...Break out of shackles and be free, is what I take away from this :)
ReplyDeleteYes;.) Thanks dear:-)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem it is Eli..!! The rhymes and the meaning that you're trying to convey..!
ReplyDeleteGood job..
Cheers
Thanks a lot. Hugs
DeleteBeautiful poem.. made my heart soar with happiness.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you so much sweetie:-)
DeleteBeautiful, positive poem, and lovely photos too.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Rhonda:-)
DeleteDearest Eli,
ReplyDeleteWhatever the season is bringing, colder nights or whatever but you got that inner glow back!
Lovely poem and it shows that your heart is on the mend and your soul is soaring high; indeed a free spirit once again.
A warm and tight hug,
Mariette
Yay:-) Your words make me so happy my dear friend:-) Thank you so much for your generous comments, it means a lot to me:-)
DeleteYou're quite welcome!
DeleteLove,
Mariette
love how your poems are always filled with so much life and inspiration :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear:-)
DeleteWhat a wonderful sense of freedom this conveys! Loved your poem, Eli. ☺
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Debbie:-)
DeleteThe poem does complete justice to its title. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks dear:-)
DeleteSuch a "free" feeling in the way the the words flow in this poem. Lovely, Eli!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Beloo. Hugs
DeleteSense of freedom expressed so well in this beautiful poetry! loved it!
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Thanks alot:-)
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